You can now listen to poetry on Poem Crit
Nou kan jy na poësie luister op Vers-krit
Read some tips on how to record your own poem. Click here.
Here’s a satirical humorous poem I’ve written and have recorded. I hope you’ll enjoy it.
You are welcome to publish your own sound poems here as well. Simply send us your MP3 file and we’ll publish it for you.
Homage to the hackneyed phrase
I’ve ridden on you
so many times.
You have taken me
through thick semes of meaning,
through thin semi-permeable membranes
of meaning.
You have served me stoutly
when entities became hirsute
and howled edgar-allan-poetically
at the moon’s Mons Venus.
With wonderful panache
you have galloped me past
transports of joy,
trundling inevitably towards vales of tears.
On your back you carried me across
the swollen river
of opportune circumstances,
and with a desperate gathering of sinews
you have jumped over
the amazing splendour of love,
to land, stumbling, in hard reality.
Thank you, hackneyed phrase;
in my mind
you’ll always be
a frisky filly.
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Hmm…Ek hou van die nuwe klank edisie …..
In hierdie vers vorm die begin en slotstrofe vir my ‘n besondere geheel wat die gedig netjies kompakteer…..Die tong-in-die-kies einde vind ek veral amusant en verfrissend
x-ammiemoon-x
By: ammiemoon on June 21, 2011
at 12:57
http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/08/02/the-celebrate-blogger-awards-plus-prayers-4-viola/
awards are fun, u win the celebrate blogger of June in short stories honorable mention award, plus 4 friendship awards, the only cin voted for you.
viola lost her husband,
I lost a general friend,
all together,
please visit and give love to them…
thanks
By: Jingle on August 2, 2010
at 16:03
lovely,
mild and wild images,
you are creative!
By: Jingle on August 1, 2010
at 21:55
Dit is a pragtige vers. EK kan nou nie hier op kantoor luister nie, en het nie die nodige tegnologie om self “op te neem” nie, maar ek dink dis ‘n skitterende idee. Ek sien my vers mos in ieder geval as goed wat hardop gelees moet word. Lieflik. Regtig.
By: Robin Hawkins on July 12, 2010
at 08:59
Baie dankie, Robin.
Kyk gerus na die wenke wat ek gee oor hoe om jou eie gedig op te neem. Dalk begeester dit jou. Ek sal graag van jou werk in klank wil hoor.
By: De Waal on July 12, 2010
at 11:32
Speaking poetry you become the poem’s wind
chime. Thanks De Waal this is an added bonus to this website.
By: skoonlief on July 11, 2010
at 18:32